I love all the exquisite detailing. I always wished I could create these kinds of beautiful patterns. Such detail on that trunk as well. Do you plan out the pattern so it's composed well? If so, how?
Anyways, I think you did a great job editing the page division. Honestly, I can't tell what you're talking about. I presume I should be looking for some broken lines or blurs in the middle, but I can't tell.